Wednesday, 2 December 2015

Book review - Justice & Jealousy, by Ellie Blake



This book is promoted as a mystery, even in the subtitle, but what it really is is a fluffy romance. There's certainly no 'sleuth' about it, and sadly, the writing of this book falls far short of the competence one expects in a published work. Stringent editing, to weed out homophone errors and the several continuity issues, would do a lot for it. From the point where anything actually starts happening, about halfway through the book, it was so clumsily written that I had trouble following it.

With a lot more work, and appropriate targeting, more could have been made of it, but basically it lacks substance.

Tuesday, 1 December 2015

Release Announcement - No Such Thing

RELEASE ANNOUNCEMENT




TITLE: No Such Thing
Author: Tabitha Ormiston-Smith
Genres: Children's literature, fantasy
Word Count: 19,333



When Callie Jones finds her father's house is about to be foreclosed, she little dreams of the solution she will find to their financial problems. But as Callie learns, actions have consequences, and sometimes the cure is worse than the disease....

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Monday, 30 November 2015

Book review - #IAm16ICanRape, by Kirtida Gautam



What an amazing journey this has been. Unlike a novel that exists merely to entertain, #IAm16ICanRape is a member of a class which I would describe as literary activism. Such books are rare; most writers with a sociopolitical agenda choose to pursue that agenda via the medium of non-fiction. When it is done, if it is done well, as is certainly the case here, the reader cannot remain unchanged by it. So when I say journey, it is not a mere figure of speech for reading a long book. I learned from this book, and having learned, am forever changed.

In this book, the phenomenon of rape is dissected through the media of the points of view of the many different players in the drama. We are accustomed to think of rape in terms of the criminal and the victim, but just by using this technique, Gautam clearly shows how ripples spread out from the crime, affecting many, many more people. Like a drop of ink in a bowl of clear water, its darkness spreads and spreads. This, more than anything, for me showed the whole 'rape' issue in a different and more terrible light.

If the book is viewed as a text, I am not fully competent to evaluate it, not being qualified in psychology. The reasoning laid out in the appendix seemed believable to me, but as I say, this ventures into a professional area where I'm not at home; therefore, I will not comment about the psychological reasoning given in the appendix. Viewed as a piece of literature, however, I can and do say that it is a remarkably fine piece of work, broad and deep and life-changing. Like all gifted writers, Gautam engages the reader from the beginning and maintains that engagement throughout the work, even for the rapist, a character wonderfully drawn, and rivalling any character I have ever read for sheer repulsiveness.

I had only one real criticism of the work, and it is really an issue of presentation rather than anything going to the core of the work. Throughout the book there are many phrases and sentences, even groups of several sentences, in a language which I take to be Hindi, although I am aware that India has a number of languages, so it might be something else. My point, however, is that it is not English. Although one doesn't wish to be ethnocentric, and the country and culture of India are central, even cardinal to the work, the thing is that this edition has been translated into (or perhaps written in) English, and is therefore intended for English speakers to read. It is therefore a flaw when parts of it are unable to be read. I would have much preferred to see the English for these sections given, perhaps in parentheses immediately afterwards IF the foreign language was really necessary, but I suspect that in many cases this was not so. I do not, of course, refer to single words or phrases, such as 'beta', which are accessible enough from the context.

All in all, though, a fine, fine piece of work, and for a debut novel, really extraordinary, and I should be surprised if this book does not live on as a classic text in its subject.

#IAm16ICanRape is available from AMAZON in both e-book and paperback.

Sunday, 29 November 2015

Short story review: The Effect-Displacement Assassin, by Danielle Ste-Just



An excellent piece of writing, startlingly original and well done - but I did find the ending a little weak. In my opinion, the place to have ended the story would have been on the presentation of the award - the terrible moment of the scientist realising she had spoiled her own lifetime triumph would have been the most climactic ending, and running on after it, I felt, robbed the story of much of its impact.

The Effect-Displacement Assassin is available from AMAZON. While you're there, you can preorder my romance/crime novella, Operation Tomcat, which will release on 11 December.


Friday, 27 November 2015

Book review: UnEnchanted, by Chanda Hahn



I'm a big fan of fairytale retellings, and UnEnchanted didn't disappoint, although I found the concept slightly derivative. As a fairytale retelling it was competent, as a high-school story it was competent, and all round the book was a pleasant way to idle away a couple of hours. But somehow it never realised its early promise; it was not so much that there was anything missing - klutzy, lovable heroine, check - loyal sidekick, check - ancient evil, check - just that there was nothing special to make this book rise above the great mass of similar books out there.

UnEnchanted is available from AMAZON and SMASHWORDS.

Thursday, 26 November 2015

Book review: Hostile Witness, by Rebecca Forster



 

Hostile Witness is billed as a legal thriller, and I don't know that I really agree with that classification; although it's true that the whole thing is about a murder trial, nothing in the plot hinges on a matter of law; it is all about matters of fact. To me, it seemed more appropriately designated a psychological thriller.

This, though, is just by the way - this quibble certainly didn't affect my enjoyment of a complex and brilliantly excecuted thriller. It was exciting, believable and scary as hell. The courtroom scenes were beautifully done, and if Ms Forster is not in the law herself I am sure she has at least logged many courtroom hours in the pursuit of verisimilitude. The characters were engaging and realistic, in the psychological sense. An excellent beginning caught the reader from the first page, and the book didn't let go. I'd certainly like to read more from this author.

I was slightly irritated at the apparent carelessness of the proofreading of this fine book. Frequent homophone errors (not that frequent, but I did notice at least four or five, and that is four or five too many for a published work) were a nagging irritant.

Hostile Witness is available on AMAZON in ebook, paperback and audible editions, and also on  SMASHWORDS.

Wednesday, 25 November 2015

Book review - Children of Ur, by Scott Rhine



Set in the Ryoku universe, Children of Ur did not engage me as much as the other two Ryoku books. I believe the reason for this was that unlike the wonderful Aaron Walker, I found the protagonist, Redwing, rather two-dimensional and consequently, to me, much less interesting.

The other criticism I have of the book is that there was far too much backstory being dumped through the opening chapters; it was still trickling in at 24% and with this much explanation of background required, I felt it would have been better done in a prologue. One cannot rely on the reader having read earlier books in the series, and while this book technically stands alone, Redwing was a creature of the previous book and did not fully come alive in this one.

It was an entertaining read, despite this, and the ending is lovely - a triumph of wit and cunning.

Children of Ur is available from AMAZON.