An excellent piece of writing, startlingly original and well done - but I did find the ending a little weak. In my opinion, the place to have ended the story would have been on the presentation of the award - the terrible moment of the scientist realising she had spoiled her own lifetime triumph would have been the most climactic ending, and running on after it, I felt, robbed the story of much of its impact.
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