This is a charming story, and I did like it, very much. I was unable to give it more than three stars, though, because the author's English is just not up to the job. He can clearly write; whether the problems with this story's language are due to an overly ambitious attempt to write in a language which is not his own first language, or whether they have been caused by less-than-competent translation, who can tell; I can only judge the finished product, and the language needs a lot of work.
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