Monday 28 December 2020

The Deal Breakers

Something independent authors often use to  get the word out about their books is to offer a free copy. Doing this has several benefits. The main thing is that we hope it will place our work before a wider audience, and we may gain new readers who will subsequently look for and buy more of our books, tell their friends, and so on. A secondary benefit is that we may gain some reader reviews.

It's a popular technique. It's easy to do, and it's free. However, people don't always get the massive avalanche of downloads for which they were hoping. In today's blog, I'll be talking about why that is. Of course this is from my own perspective: the things that stop me from taking advantage of a free offer. 

Here, in a rough chronological order, are the things that will cause me to scroll on past a free book.

First of all, I'll say this. I am, and have always been, totally keen on free stuff. I just love anything that's free; this is partly because I'm a poverty-stricken writer, and partly because I was brought up thrifty. I hate to pay full price for anything. So you have that going for you right up front - just the fact it's free makes it worth a look.

Deal Breaker One - The Post Itself.

The actual post in which the free book is offered has major potential to put me off. I'll list the ways in which this can happen in descending order of seriousness.

1. The post contains a quote from the book that reveals it's porn, fan-fiction, or any other kind of rubbish. 

If any material from the book is quoted in the post, this is like a preliminary 'Look Inside', and it has enormous turn-off power, because one assumes the quote has been chosen because it's one of the best bits, so if it is truly horrible, or if it reveals the presence of porn, I know there's absolutely no point looking further. 

2. The post contains spelling or grammatical errors.

This is self-explanatory. 

3. The post contains any degree of begging. 

For example, pleas that you need to sell lots of copies because you're 'a autism author' - yes, I've really seen this - or to feed your 17 children, or to get treatment for your grandmother's broken legs - any kind of begging is so inappropriate in this context that it's enough to stop me in my tracks. If the book can't stand on its own merits, I'm not interested.

4. The person posting is not the author.

I'm not really sure why this is such a turn-off for me. I suspect this might be just me.

5. I've seen the post too many times.

If this book has been offered, over and over again, in a lot of groups, I feel as if I'm being badgered, and I will decline it just on general principle.

6. No buy link is provided.

If you want me to download your free book, you have to make it easy for me. I am not going to lift a finger to chase it.

If you survive all of this, I may click through on the link provided. 

Deal Breaker Two - The Cover.

Back in the days when all books were either paperback or hardcover, I'd have scoffed at the idea that the cover art might influence a buyer's choice. Now, however, when it's all ebooks, I've learned that the cover actually does tell you quite a bit. There are several ways in which the cover will dissuade me from looking any further.

1. It Looks Like Porn


If the cover of the book has a picture of a shirtless man, that's enough to raise an eyebrow, but if his head isn't even in the picture, that's it for me. I know the book is going to be porn, and I don't want to read it. 

2. They Just Haven't Tried

If the cover has obviously been generated using one of the standard templates offered by KDP - yes, Virginia, you can tell, especially if there is a big pink stripe across it - this makes me think it's Amateur City, and unless the blurb is VERY intriguing, I'm going to pass on this one.

3. Amateurish Artwork

I hesitated over whether to include this, because the bar you have to reach for me to think it's okay is very, very low, and in fact all by itself this isn't a real deal breaker for me, but it does put me in a far less positive frame of mind when I look further.

Deal Breaker Three - The Process of Obtaining It

1. The Landing Place

Hopefully, this will be a book page on Amazon or Smashwords. If it is not, it will either be to some bookseller where I probably don't have an account, or to the author's own page. 

If it's a bookseller, you have lost me. I'm not setting up an account with a merchant just to get a free book.

If it's the author's own page, you have probably lost me, especially if I have to scroll through a huge rigmarole of promotional yelling to get at it. I'm not particularly keen to get on extra mailing lists, which always happens if you download from an author's own site. 

2. The Format Offered

If the book is to be downloaded from the author's own page, and it's only available as a pdf, I am not interested. If you can't be bothered to produce a proper e-book, then I can't be bothered reading your book. 


If the book on offer has passed all of these tests, I will now have a look at the blurb.

Deal Breaker Four - The Blurb

1. Poor English

If the blurb contains any failure of correct English, that's a total deal breaker. I've put this first because it is the first thing I will notice. 

2. Porn


If the blurb contains any indication of porn, that is a total deal breaker. Such words as 'hot', 'steamy', 'alpha' have over the years become top porn-indicators for me.

3. Not Original


If I find on reading the blurb that the book is fan-fiction, which I take to be, inter alia, anything that is about characters from another writer's work, this is a deal breaker.

4. Boring


If the blurb fails to catch my interest, that's a deal breaker. Once upon a time it wasn't, but that was in my early days of kindle use, when I had failed to grasp just how many free books are out there. These days, I require to be at least moderately intrigued to proceed to the next step.

Deal Breaker Five - The Look Inside

Finally, if a book has made it this far, I will be opening up the Look Inside feature on Amazon, or the Preview on Smashwords. If I have reached this point, I will probably download the book. However, there are still rocks on which it may founder.

Once upon a time, we browsed in bookstores and opened the book to read a few paragraphs at random. This would still be my preference, but alas! these preview features force one to start at the beginning.

1. Layout

If the first thing I see after the title page is pages and pages of Table of Contents, with nothing more than 'Chapter One, Chapter Two, etc', I will be put off. This in itself is not a deal breaker, but if I have been displeased by anything at all before reaching this point, it has the capacity to become one. This is because it's a really stupid place to put the Table of Contents in an ebook; they should go at the back, and also because if the person knows what he is doing, it's easy enough to set the 'Start' of the Look Inside to the beginning of the actual book, which is all one wishes to see at this point.

2. Language


Once I'm at the start of the book, you have one screen only to impress me. I am not going to turn the page at all, unless I read that first page and see perfect spelling and perfect grammar. There are no exceptions to this.

3. Content

I still won't turn the page unless I'm caught up enough in the story by the end of the first page to care what happens. It's the writer's job to do this. If there is clumsy use of dialogue, if there is a female character looking in the mirror and describing herself, if there's any hint that the book is poorly written, that of course is an absolute deal breaker. Remember, although I've written a long article about this process, in real life it has probably only taken thirty seconds from the point at which I first saw the post.

If I turn the page, and if I still feel the same way after reading another page, that's the point at which you have won, and I'll download the book. I still might not read it, but that's another story for another day.



Sunday 20 December 2020

Any Time Could Be the Last


 I've an inveterate habit of looking at my Facebook Memories. Almost every day I do it - I go through all the posts from this date in previous years, and I relive my joys and sorrows. Sometimes I see a comment from someone who is no longer in the world, and that's a bittersweet moment.

Today I came across a short video of my dog, Beau. It was the last video I ever took of him. He'd been ill for a long time, and he was recovering, and the video is of him happily playing with his squeaky stuffed pelican, and although the ravages of his long illness can be seen in his face, it's a happy time and it made me smile. 

It was sad, too, though, because this was the very last video I ever took of Beau. And six months later, he was dead. I wasn't expecting it; he'd fully recovered, and I'd just spent weeks carefully building up his fitness again, and that day he seemed to be completely back to normal, and a few hours later, he was gone. 

It makes me think about last times. We almost never know when we are doing something for the last time. It could be anything - the last time you hug your friend before the accident. The last time you film your dog. I wish I'd taken more videos. But however many I took, one of them was going to be the last.

Many years ago, I had another friend die suddenly. I was washing the dishes after dinner, and my cat Samson leaped up to the very top of the kitchen cupboard (a jump of about eight feet from the floor, which he executed with effortless grace.) He knocked down a whole lot of cardboard boxes which I had stored up there. It was very naughty of him, but for some reason I was feeling mellow and instead of shouting at him, I just laughed and made some little joke about it. Shortly afterwards he disappeared up the hall. I finished the dishes and decided to walk to the post box to post a letter I had written, but first, of course, a trip to the lavatory. And I found him lying on the bathroom floor, quite dead. I have always been so, so glad I didn't shout at him about those boxes, because those were my last words to him, and I would have hated them to have been angry ones.

We never know when something like this is going to happen. So now, while we are bracing ourselves for Christmas, while we're stressed and tired and overwhelmed with the huge list of things that still have to be done, let's take a moment to be sure that our last words to anyone won't be angry ones. Let's reach out to anyone with whom we've been quarrelling, or having a coldness, or anything of that nature. Let's decide just to let it go, even if - especially if - we feel we are in the right and they are in the wrong. Just let it go.

Because you never know if you'll have another chance.

Saturday 5 December 2020

 

TOP CAT'S ALLEY WRITERS' AWARDS 2020

The moment a very, very few people may have been waiting for - my 2020 awards presentation.

I wish, how I wish, that I were as rich as Stephen King. Then there would be massive cash prizes to go with these awards. As it is, there is only the glory.

Note that not all of the winning books were first published this year. That's because these are MY awards, and therefore it is about when I read the book, not when it was first published. So without further ado, these are the works I feel deserve special mention, from what I've read and seen in 2020.

BEST NOVEL PUBLISHED IN 2020

Charlotte Wood, for The Weekend

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BEST ACTION NOVEL

Andy Peloquin, for Lethal Extraction

Preorder at Amazon



BEST ANTHOLOGY
BEST POLITICAL FICTION

Benjamin Gorman and Jack Dye, for Shout!

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BEST CHRISTIAN FICTION

Ray Anselmo, for Flight to Freedom

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BEST SERIOUS NON-FICTION

Vladislav Matrenitsky, for Carcinogenic Mind

BEST HUMOROUS NON-FICTION

Biju Vasudevan, for The Ultimate, Complete and Comprehensive Self-Help Book on How to Avoid Being Conned by Self-Help Books, and Also Why To Avoid Them


Get it at Amazon

BEST SHORT STORY

Michael J Sullivan, for The Ashmoore Affair
Jennifer Lee Rossman, for No Collision

BEST MAGAZINE

Marcia Pinskier, for Gesher

BEST FANTASY SERIES


John Kang, for Scions of the Black Lotus

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BEST ACTION SERIES

Andy Peloquin, for Cerberus

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BEST CHILDREN'S SERIES

Carrie Cross, for Skylar Robbins

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BEST DETECTIVE SERIES

Simon Brett, for Mrs Pargeter

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MOST LIKABLE CHARACTER

Charlaine Harris, for Sookie Stackhouse


MOST HORRIBLE VILLAIN

James Patterson, for The Mastermind


BEST INSULT

Andy Peloquin, for "pencil-dicked asshole" in Paragon Slayer

FUNNIEST MISUNDERSTANDING OF A GRAMMATICAL RULE

Christina Kaye, for the following:
"Lay (people do this) and lie (objects do this)... people lay in the bed, objects lie on the counter."

CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL WINNERS!